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Love Now Brutal

Love, so gruesome
At its worst
Insipidly fearsome
If lavished in futility
On mankind so brute

Seated in silent flames
He watches his heart wither
A part she cut away
Her tool, blunt coldness
Her love can’t be had

Walking down the street
Her illusions gone with his voice
As her world crumbles around
His love was heaven, yesterday
Love’s just fantasy, says he

But mankind, made so soft
Now have mutated to rocks, so hard
Much unlike the creator
Have remade love
Into a tool for the brute

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  • Mikexplore
    June 22
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    this is cool

    But you can help make it better.