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Sad Day

He's manly, he has so much hair
it's like im in bed with a grizzly bear
His dick isn't straight, but it'll do fine
that just means itll hit my gspot in no time
he starts going fast, then he goes slow
when will he stop? i dont even wanna know
but suddenly, the motherfucker cums
and then turns into just another lazy bum
so now hes off to sleep
im left with only my fingers to put in deep

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cut me some slack!lol

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  • Odd Thomas
    June 22

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    very....interesting, i sence more anger in this than i would erotic, but sex should be an experience shared by both partners not just one