Dark & tall he stands,
Everything I say he always understands.
Lovely and meaningful are his words
That the make people sing and tweet like birds.
He's always been there for me,
And vowed he always will be.
There are times when we fell apart,
These times completely broke his heart.
Close friends for ever we will be,
A gentleman he is I'm sure others would agree.
For his lovingness & devotion,
He fills people with such emotion.
I hope for everything done
There are many more days of fun to come.
Thank you for everything Brendan.
Comments
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lovely dedication to a friend. i can tell that your heart was in this piece and that's what matters. keep on writing.
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Also needs work
Love the way you do your rhyming
Just seems to lack flow
Keep up the good work though
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