When I heard those words
come crashing down.
I closed my eyes,
and prayed that I was dreaming.
Why should I not let go?
I'm screaming baby don't
let me go.
I need you
I'm just dreaming.
I swear baby
it'll be okay.
Can I wake up now;
just wake me up.
The walls are falling now,
and down we go.
Your slipping away
it's to painful to be true.
I swear I'm just dreaming.
Just wake me up now.
I'm screaming for you
to hold on.
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I'm not sure I like this much, but it felt good to get it all out. I think it's slightly pwoerful in it's own way.
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'I swear I'm just dreaming.
Just wake me up now.
I'm screaming for you
to hold on.'
Ive had dreams like this before.
..well nightmares I guess.
excellent write.
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I meant it to be similar to a nightmare ^_^
glad I got somewhat of the feel in there.
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