I think I saw this coming.
In fact, I have feared this for some time.
Only a few months ago I was confident
in the solid structure.
But I always had that nagging feeling
that it could go this way.
And then I felt it changing.
Turning in this direction as I'd feared.
But I always thought there would be reasons.
Answers I could take with me
and learn from.
Now I see where this is going
but I do not understand Why or How.
How could I fight it,
Prevent it,
or Prepare for it
When I do not understand it?
This is not my choice.
This is not my decision.
All is in the other hands.
I will take my leave if it is asked of me.
I tried my best I think,
but perhaps it was not good enough.
JSM
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well written. Like that it was written about you/ me..
gave a great inner perspective. Excellent.
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i like it.a poem about "me" nice! words are good and
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thumbs up!
I really like the way your poem takes us thru the doubt, the unsureness, the quest for answers, the giving up of how many relationships go. you did it with very nice words and just the right amount of emotions. this is my best read of the day. good job!
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I thought it was interesting, and did a good job of keeping a sense of mystery. I liked the second stanza the most. nice job
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pure talent here, awesome job
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