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Sleep

when i sleep, my darling,
i dream of you
here in a place
where dreams more than come true
no more darkness,
and no more fright.
so sleep, my darling,
through this endless night.

sleep, my darling
sleep, my love
sleep will carry you up and above
to a place
where dreams more than come true
so sleep, my darling,
and dream of me too.

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would it lull you to sleep?

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  • i think yes...its nice. well written, dreamy.
    your writing has quite floaty feel to it...
    i like it.

    (haha, i read poems via the random button...youve come up twice now. how nice.)