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for now

i love you, for now
im here, for now
im only this person for now
you will soon see the dark side of me
so for now tell me you love me to
and for now stick by my side
but soon you will see the self perfection i crave
the blood that at one time ran threw my veins
and the pain i desire
so you think im sane, for now

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  • Wolffan
    June 22
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    I liked the repitition of "for now"
    Good imagery
    I liked it