She invites her family to a concert at school
They don't show up.
She sings beautifully, but is so saddened.
She gets home, walking 2 miles to her house.
"Where were you bitch?!" her brother asks as she walks in.
His friend chuckled on the sofa.
"I had a concert at school." she'd say
very low.
His expression changed.
"You better not have fucked up!
I still go there you know!" he'd say
as he slapped her in the face.
She yelped.
"I didn't.
Everyone said I did beautifully."
She said, then covered her mouth
knowing she should not have talked back.
"Oh, so now you feel all brave to talk back to me, eh!"
he’d say, punching her in the stomach.
Shed crumple to the floor in pain.
His friend whispers to him.
His face lightens and she’s terrified.
"Sure JJ, have your fun.
Her room is the first door on the left." he'd say.
She was so confused.
His friend grabbed her
She realized what was going to happen and she began to fight against
his friend.
"Please! NO! I'll do anything but this!
Please!" she begged, as she was dragged into her room.
Her plea's were met by her brothers laughter
and his friend's hands.
He locked the door
and raped her.
Screams could be heard from the room.
An hour later, his friend unlocked the door
and came out.
A look of satisfaction on his face.
"She was good, I take it?"
her brother would ask.
His friend nodded his head.
She laid, sprawled on her bed crying
softly, so her brother would not be angry.
She slowly got up and silently went to the bathroom
to wash off her brother's friend's touch.
She came out, her brother sprawled on top
of the sofa snoring softly.
She went to his room and grabbed his blanket and pillow.
She helped him get comfortable and went to bed.
Author notes
THIS DID NOT HAPPEN TO ME!!!!!!
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Comments
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oh my god this is so sad and brutal.
gosh when i saw your author notes i was like 'oh thank GOD!!!'
this is so sad.
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This was horrible not the write but the story. I am glad you clarified that it didn't happen to you. I am glad to hear it was nothing but fiction. You did a good job writting this piece really you did. Thank you for sharing it
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Oh what a horrible story. I am so glad that you said it did not happen to you. That brother and his friend needs to be in prison. No on and I mean no one has the right to force another person into any situation like that. No does indeed mean No!
Now since this is fiction I can take a breathe.
And tell you that this was indeed wonderfull written. The imagery really made this stand out to me. I could picture this pain. This fear. These emotions of sufferring. Excellent. -
this is so sad man! I am about to cry!
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I need to read these in order
So please accept a short reply and I will catch up on the others
Thank you and best wishes
Julie -
'She slowly got up and silently went to the bathroom
to wash off her brothers friends touch.
She came out, her brother sprawled on top
of the sofa snoring softly.
She went to his room and grabbed his blanket and pillow.
She helped him get comfortable and went to bed.'
this is so sad...and to make it worse, kids really do go through this sort of thing.
this is an amazing write, that last stanza really got to me. -
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hehehe.... that was fun.... NOT!!!
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Wow thats crazy and sad.. hope it didn't happen to you.. i like how its realistic.. Great read
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Wow This is crazy It better never happen to you -_-
other then that since it's unrealistic this is Awesome
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