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Random Rant 3- Pain doesn't hurt when it's all you've ever felt as you crawl......

Pain doesn't hurt when it's all you've ever felt  as you crawl inside your shell and hide from desperate eyes always watching, searching for what they can't know, can never find among the darkness surrounding the blind and deaf ears bleed with the sound of crying childish innocence burnt forever as ashes fall from embers gleaming and acid rain pours down to devour forever broken hearts.

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  • ears2hearyou gold member
    August 29

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    WOW! THAT WAS A POWERFUL RANT!

    and so damn true!

    WE've missed ya....
    and since I'm a Taurus

    will request:
    you fill your ink with the blood and might
    of your beautiful soul

    and Let it all slip out upon the page
    to amaze our weary souls!

    WAY TO WRITE
    Hope you are doing well...

    WE MISS YA! Where is the STRONG SOUL OF JENNIFER?

    Glutton for Punishment SALUTE!
    ears2hearyou/Seattle