A touch of skin soft and slippery,
With the hint of sweat.
We fought our resistance beneath the cool sheets,
As the wind flowed from the window above us.
Eyes met briefly and begged for the chance,
To abandon all of our uncertainties.
You began your work on my lips,
Probing gently as if drawing sex,
From a deep well of longing and need.
Then heated tongues met in the midst,
Of hot and quickening breath.
And greedily we drank the wine of our lusts.
Then intoxicated with those spirits,
Our clothes found resting place on the floor.
Piece by piece,
Until there were no hiding places,
For the two glistening and wanting bodies.
Hunger revealed in this hot moment.
Then skin meshed with skin,
As the floor became the stage.
You moved atop of me easily,
And lowered yourself gently.
Kissing me as I was filled with you.
As a gasp broke the kiss,
Your hands stroked the stray strands,
Away from my forehead, then became entangled.
Our slow rhythm gave way,
To urgent and demanding thrusts of passion,
As I arched my body for your comfort,
And you threw me into ecstasy,
With the strength of your blows.
You left me screaming and soaked,
In oblivion again and again,
As you growled my name from the back of your throat,
And our bodies both demanded more,
Each giving to the other,
High on the fluids of foreign substance.
I grasped, then released you,
Grasped then released you,
In effort to relieve you of your control.
The taste of your skin between my lips,
Was like no other.
To hear your cry of mercy,
When my teeth met your warm skin,
Was more breathtaking than you knew.
Yet I still released the control to you.
As you wound your hands in my hair,
And pulled until the flesh on my neck was taut,
You moved with one final and breaking blow,
Forcing our way to the peaks of bliss,
Leaving our screams to echo on like battle cries.
I welcomed the weight of you to crush me,
As you collapsed on top of me,
Still hot and burning,
And I glowing like an ember,
Casting a welcome light,
Should you seek my gifts again.
Author notes
Yes,I was hot and Burning.
See what you caused! 
In a list
A contest entry
- erotica (from the girls POV) by Odd Thomas.
400 points, ended July 5, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sexual Sensations ~ Creamy Interpretations by Still Standing.
1800 points, ended July 17, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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WELL WORTH LEAVING A PARTY TO COME HOME TO.
I welcomed the weight of you to crush me,
As you collapsed on top of me,
Still hot and burning,
And I glowing like an ember,
Casting a welcome light,
Should you seek my gifts again.
GOOD LUCK in the two contests that you have submitted this juicy and sensual piece to, MISS MANDI - and may I say it certainly had me head in whirl to say the least -and that is all i will say as I'm under instructions from me MISTRESS to say no more - LOL - except that this fellow that was with you was a VERY LUCKY MAN, indeed!
Love & Peace!
Earl.
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Loved it
This was just like a movie it started out slow and then you took the reader with you as you quickened the pace then reached the climax and allowed us to bathe in the afterglow. Wonderful good luck
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Jade, you're turning up the heat for 'em are you?
You know you're gonna get somebody all hot and bothered with this. I like how you did this without going so deeply graphic. Good luck in the contest. -
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Girl you know it!
That's the way to keep 'em all ' hot and bothered'
You don't have to get all smutty to keep 'em that way either. lol
Thank you for commenting,Hun!
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wow, im just speachless, excellent job! thank you for entering and good luck
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Lol, Thanks!
Glad you liked it!
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shower jobs all round, steamy jungle hot! you did the poem with taste though, erotic without it turning to porn.
Regards.
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a very hot and steamy write that is for sure. Well done your words were well chosen and definetly got a reaction
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HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTT DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMNN
wow.. my man better watch out you bound to put a hurting on him! l.o.l.
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good job ive done fire traing and have aspestos undies but i still feel the heat my babe puts out shes on fire and i love it . lol thanks for reading her too bro shes gold . glenn
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ROFLMAO!
Hey ! It was his fault why I wrote this anyway!
I see you liked it byt the response." Hot Damn" phew that made me laugh! -
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sorry i had to leave the house caught on fire and even the fire guys said sorry glenn cant enter this is way too hot to put out lol you rock huney
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ROFLMAO!
It was your fault!
See this what you get when you play with matches!
Touch me,Turn me on,And burn me down! lol
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