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The Hunt

I smell it....
that crimson achohol....
how I love the taste of that warm, crimson liquid

My master says it's called blood

sweet...sweet...blood!

Those demons pocess it....inside their bodies...

My master says they're called humans

and that I should kill as many as I can

and I always follow my master's orders!

blood....blood....blood....blood....blood...

I need it....the smell is overwhelming!

There's one...one of those stinking humans....

Oh...and this one has a lot of blood...O+ I believe....

That's my favorite....

I creep low in the darkness.....

the shrubs will keep me hidden

The human is walking rather quickly....

maybe he senses my presence...

I shall kill him with pleasure...

I always love a chase!

I walk out of the shrubs...summoning darkness to cover me

as I swoop in and attack the human...

I missed his neck!

I only cut his face...

but I can smell his blood...and it's making a trail!

I follow it...the human is running to the forest

I will kill him there...master always said to kill in private

the human runs into the forest...I avoid the trees...eyes on my prey

the human suddenly stops and colapses....I shall kill him now!

blood...blood....blood....blood...blood...

the human then swings around and trusts a sharp stick into me

I feel like screaming!!!

The pain...it hurts more than my birth!

I feel like I'm dying...wait I smell something....

BLOOD!!!!

there is blood flowing through my body...

I must have it!

I attack my chest....clawing at it...

I need the sweet crimson liquid in my stomach!

I see a bright light....NO!!!

Death is calling me...yet again!

"Master...." I call out as the light consumes me...

Author notes

XxCrystal--DanielxX (Crystal)
big bro...i hope u like ut

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  • WOOOOO

  • WOW!
    I feel like I was watching Angel or better version of Buffy the Vampire Slayer *curses*
    Wonderful Wicked job you have done here. I like the idea. I enjoyed the chase and the feel and comments on the smell of the blood.

    Very nicely written. I applaud you for that.
    Thank you so much for entering in my contest, best of luck and keep on writing,

    Nooni

  • OUTSTANDING

    that was beastly haha amazing to read

  • Very good. Different, but good none the less.

  • nice

    i like this alot...awsome job...=]

  • mM...VERY GOOD!

  • twin i gotta say this is a fucked up twisted poem buuuuuttttt I LOVE IT

  • ha its pretty awesome....i pic everything u said!


  • Jazzlyn
    June 21
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    O.O wow vicious! lol i LOVE IT!!!

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