Let we as we are be known,
for we as we are,
are not as we were
but as we are now, we strive to be
in faith we have chosen,
in faith we shall move,
dancing, praising, singing glorious are you
my L-rd, Oh G-d
in faith and in love,
complete such utterance
complete and entranced
spirit, soul, and mind
such delicate convulsions
such delicate convulsions in which we all dance
the holy is falling
the holy is here
the holy among us,
our father is near
come with us,
come play with us,
come be with us,
our father we love,
can we run now,
can we jump now,
can we scream now
Holy Unto You now
raising our hands now
in joy,
shedding our tears now,
Our father,
we hold you so dear....
A contest entry
- Hold my hand... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended June 22, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PREWRITES! by forbidden-colour.
400 points, ended August 10, 112 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Reminded me of a song called Oh Father by Madonna, back when she was a human being and not just silicon and scrapings from a metal works factory.
Thank you for entering, good luck,
Sophie
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Indeed you are veryhonest and very intimate while describing your gestures of love for HIM..thank you somuch for the wonderful poetry for my contest...
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ABSOLUTELY OUTSTANDING!! This piece is beautifully written! The structured repetitiveness! I love it great job! And good luck!!
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