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Haiku – [summer day]


  hot mid-summer’s day
misted flow over smooth rocks
        sweet smell of hemlock


Author notes

Picture inspired;
http://www.3planesoft.com/img/nature_screen01.jpg

Traditional Haiku
5-7-5 syllables

My Zen Poetry

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  • Naughtygrlred
    June 25

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    death filled the air, and yet it never looked so sweet, that is wha i got from your poem... great write...


  • MysteriousWhisper
    June 22

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    i like the middle line. it is a beautiful image and it awakens the senses. great job and good luck in the contest!


  • penchanted
    June 22
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    Beautiful picture and imagery in this.. it just oozes of green and peace.. Well done!
    Jo


  • PorcelainHope
    June 22
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    Perferct haiku for the pic.



  • Starretta
    June 21
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    beautiful!


    • Malabu
      June 21
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      that was quick...just posted it
      thanks for your comment

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