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Sun Dress

To play guitar
In the summer
As a woman passes by
In a sun dress,

I’m so happy
To sit in the grass
With musical insects.

I never intend
To be sad;
When you see me,
I’ll be smiling.

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  • ea silver member
    June 22
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    musical insects playing along - I can hear them. I'm glad you'll be smiling, too.