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August 15th

Missing image

 

 

It was August 15th~  

 

Forget me not’s waved ~ unseen.

their blue smearing the peripheral.

A forlorn brand was placed

marring my personal forever…   

 

Hers… will be longer than mine.

 

Chilled, traveling thin-skinned emotions,

seeing before feeling

the rupture ~ shock waves

collapsing the bridge

 

between her heart,

and our home.  

 

Wishing my own weeping

could cleanse away the ache

slithering bitter

tainting youths innocent pulse.

 

 

Words are so useless,

in times like this, but still~ 

 

I must try ~  

 

 

Haunted, the atmosphere caressed damply,

collecting tears, 

guiding their messages...

 

... somewhere ?

     

 



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  • A very painful telling; sometimes I wonder if the heart ever really knows it's home - It wanders so.


  • JinSays gold member
    July 7

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    Chilled, traveling thin-skinned emotions,
    seeing before feeling
    the rupture ~ shock waves
    collapsing the bridge

    between her heart,
    and our home.

    sigh...
    having been in this situation I can only say, ouch this really really hurt. brought back so much pain. I've seen it from both angles too, which is something I'd never change.
    Love to ya honey,
    jin

  • So much pain wrapped around your words, yet there are glimmers of strength as well, and where there is strength, there is always hope. Beautiful words. ~Pamela


  • Cannonsfire
    June 21
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    Beautifully written hun C


  • Pure Thought silver member
    June 21
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    Extremely strong and caring poem. Well said.

  • Gave me goosebumps! Absolutely beautiful hun. The wanting to wash the injustices away...

  • Bob Fox
    June 21

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    poet

    I what happens when we care to much. Why do we let ourselves suffer so when the other side cares not. I guess we must all go home in the end. I am amazed.

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