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All I wanted to do (for you)

I missed you
so I wrote you a song
and I played it
live
in a studio
in my head
but there was no
one there to hear it
no one
I drew a picture of what it was like
which I wanted to show you
but no one was there
to see
I thought I would mail it
yes
to you
I folded it up and put on a stamp
but there was no post office
of course not
and so I built a mailbox
but no one came
I sat by the blue mailbox I made
no one came
on the grass
I lied
fell asleep
dreamed
that you were
there
you saw it
held it
felt it
looked at it
and cried
and dreamed
with me

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I don't know why I was so lonely this day

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