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Green Apple Tree

Twisted, gnarled with roots exposed, you are,
Rotted and infested, baring bitter fruit.

Contrary,
Fresh buds of spring and summer fruit, I bare,
Tart but sweet, from bitter root.

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  • baghdaelf
    June 22
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    Very nice! This could apply to so many things. Thank you for entering and good luck!