My cake slice didn't last
cause the ice cream melted fast.
I was eating it outside
but in the sun I nearly died.
When I came back in
I spilt some icing on my chin.
Licked it with my tongue,
feeling like a child so young.
With my belly nearly full,
I plowed through it like a bull.
But I ate too much cake,
now I have a tummy ache.
Author notes
...I laughed while I was writing it anyway.
Based on a true story.
V e l v e t W i n g s
A contest entry
- Anything Funny! by XxLoverOfDarknessxX.
650 points, ended June 27, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lighthearted/Funny Poems! (Prewrites Allowed) by XxNinjaNemoxX.
700 points, ended August 9, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is cute and made me smile! I love how simple and relateable it is. Nice work here and good luck to you!
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Thanks for your kind comment~
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This poem has very simple rhymes and it's about a very simple story. Thats it.
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It was meant to be that way =\
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OMG, I found this RIGHT after I wrote a brownie poem, lol, this was a great poem
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Oh how I can relate *giggles*
I'm sure this has happened to everyone at some point, which makes it even better
Thanks for entering and best of luck
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Thanks! Glad you like it~
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lol i liked this piece.
it was cute, and very funny. something i can relate to, given this has happened to me before. 
keep up the good work! this was hilarious! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!
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Thanks for your comment!
It was ice cream cake for Father's Day ^_^
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