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All of my memories.

Growing up and getting older, laughing back now at mistakes made.  
I've never been perfect, no one is ever flawless.
All that's happened has only made me myself,
And my life I would never trade.
I'll never forget these memories that I possess,
It's all a part of life's progress.

All my memories will always stay with me.
Never to be forgotten, never to be erased.
Good or bad, they are meant to be.
I'll always remember, everything I've faced.

Thinking back to when I was younger, never knew where I was going.
Trusted the wrong people, fell in the wrong hands,
I didn't know any better, making mistakes, it's all apart of growing.
It's impossible to live the way you dream, life itself has it's own plans.

All my memories will always stay with me.
Never to be forgotten, never to be erased.
Good or bad, they are meant to be.
I'll always remember, everything I've faced.

So I'll keep every memory,
Everything happens for a reason, memories all apart of me.
They made me who I am, always remember, never forget.
Bad times and choice's, made me stronger, and I'll never regret.

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    August 9

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    Thank you for your entry

    I could see this as a song. Your words are effective, they show thought and consideration. They allow the reader to consider time passing, things changing - and holding on to everything that brought you to who you are.

    Thank you for entering my contest and good luck
    Shari


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    June 25

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    wonderful lyrics.....i could hear the tune in it!

    you know...you could touch that last line..
    with a strong and bold truth;

    So I'll keep every memory,
    Everything happens for a reason,
    memories all apart of me.
    They made me who I am,
    always remember, never forget.
    Bad times and choice's,
    made me stronger,

    and I
    I will never die regret.

    ears/Seattle
    just a thought!
    I loved your lyrics!

    you remind me
    of Missy Higgins the Australian
    lyricist...I'll send you one of her links!
    she writes with your depth too!



  • Antebellum
    June 22

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    Wow.

    amazing write.
    Loved the picture&&Background also.

    "So I'll keep every memory,
    Everything happens for a reason, memories all apart of me.
    They made me who I am, always remember, never forget.
    Bad times and choice's, made me stronger, and I'll never regret"


    I completly relate here. Very lyricall.
    amazing write.

    *Finalist*

  • Ahki97
    June 22
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    wow nice It's good to keep all your memories and not regret


  • songstress80
    June 21

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    i forgot to say that i loved the picture and the background...it looks really cool and i really like it...it's you! lol


  • songstress80
    June 21
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    you have a lot of genuine truths in this piece here...memories of the past are part of who you are,...all the decisions you've made in the past, your past, have made you the special and wonderful person that you are today...i'm grateful to have such a special friend such as you in my life and i hope that in turn you can say the same...
    keep up the great work and continue to always be the sweetheart that you are...never change for anybody or anything! you're perfectly sweet just the way you are!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    June 21

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    This is great! It's true that we all face so many obstacles and challenges in life. But, they only help us to move on and better ourselves in the future. It's great to read something like this because, it's not all of the time that people actually look back and are able to appreciate their past. For some it is a rather sad and heart breaking time that they keep locked up in the back of their minds.

    I love the thought that you put into this one. Wonderful work here and all the best to you with it in this contest! Take care!




    Jeremy0826

  • I loved this one sis! It was really good. The imagery in this was fantastic, and the emotions were amazing. keep up the good work sis! Awesome poem!


  • daviscth silver member
    June 21

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    This might just be my favorite I've read of yours so far! It have wonderful imagery and lots of emotion. Plus I can clearly see that you learn from your past. If only everyone was that smart it would be a much better world.

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