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I Wish…

He is so loving and adorable
Captured your heart like any other girl
It’s him you like to kiss
Every second with him you don’t wanna miss.
He completes your every need
You wanna make him the father of your kid.
He’s the perfect guy with all the right qualities
to love a girl like you with love and bliss.
And so I watch you staring at Jim
I wish I was like them, I wish I was him
So I would be holding you right now and not just dream.



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By: Shuberth Dias

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Written : Somewhere in April 2009

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  • Aww

    I like it Shuberth it has meaning to it and i can feel the love flowing through it Great write
    love
    angela


  • Patpowers silver member
    August 1
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    Very nice Shuberth. I liked what I read here...thanks again!

  • awww, Suberth,this is a very cute poem. i love it, love ya.

  • Ahh good write Shubs! I liked it.
    I liked the way you used it from your point of view towards a couple, I managed to build a picture of this poem. I'm sorry you can't have this girl, but to be honest lifes unfair sometimes. Stay strong though. Speak to you soon. Keep writing!