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so wicked

The cryptic look in her eyes conspires with his darkest desires,
whispering seductive words to toy with his heart and cock,
she bites his bottom lip gently
leaving his thoughts lascivious...
just how she wants them.

Her delicate face shadowed by auburn locks,
inviting his hands to grasp and wind it through his fingertips.
Forced to stare directly at him,
a mischievous smile smears across her face,
realizing now he was taken in by an outer innocence
that is all but missing now.

Her skin begging to play with the blackest of fantasies,
pale pink lips trembling please against his mouth
while dainty sounds fill his lecherous mind. 





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  • Rick Weston silver member
    October 31

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    i like the play of the words you selected in this piece. her delicate face shadowed - mischievous smile - and pale pink lips trembling, all deliver a satisfying read. very nice.


  • Silence of Finality gold member
    July 18
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    Nice. I'm feeling the whole picture here. I really love pieces I can relate to.


  • awannabepoet
    July 15

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    The minds that are locked in such an intricate dance as you have portrayed are they lost in the eyes of a poet?


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    July 4

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    Very good!

    Although this is short I do like the imagery that is captured here.

    **Master Ktulu**


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    June 23

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    The imagery in this is really good. A powerful eroctic piece that leaves nothing to the imagination. Very classy, and very well-written indeed. Congratulations on your gold trophy.

    Dark Wishes
    Wayne Leon

  • celadia
    June 22

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    Lovely and open. Nothing forced in this poem, congrats on the gold, I think this well deserved a gold trophy.

  • jmaslen
    June 21
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    I like this a lot. I think you have a gift for the erotic.


  • SteveS gold member
    June 21

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    Ok, I'll be back in five minutes...lol! What's the word I'm searching for.....silkilicious! I love the word choices here, clashing innocence and darkness. Those "dainty sounds" will get ya every time. Great write.


  • Dark Geometry
    June 21

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    MMMhhh

    Can you say cock tease? Lovely, sexy and... lascivious. I wanna see someone top this! Excellent word choice!


  • individuality gold member
    June 21

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    she bites his what - ohhh, let the the games begin - a good poem, had me on the edge of my seat anyway.

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