My eyes fly open, and the dream disappears,
The curtains drawn, and i'm all alone.
I thought I had you then, but you had to go,
And now I'm losing control, over and over again...
You were my daybreaker,
You brought the light,
For you, I'd die for,
For you I'd fight,
Cause you illuminate my life...
I'm in the street, It all looks so dull now,
No colour, no spark to bring some life to the sky,
Its all dust, that falls through my fingertips,
I'm on my knees and then I see you again...
You are the Daybreaker,
I know i'm right,
You fought my demons,
and you broke the spike,
Cause you illuminate my life...
You are the daybreaker
I wished you were mine
You are the daybreaker
You know you shiver my spine
You are the daybreaker
In this world you seem divine
You, you are the daybreaker...
(solo+soft instru. ending)
Author notes
was listening to metalllica when this one cam eout..strange..
A contest entry
- Rhyme Prewrite contest :) by Ami.
550 points, ended July 7, 93 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
wellz waddah choo fiink?? 0_o?!?
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this is f*cking awesome. its beautiful. absoloutely beautiful.
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i love metallica and is AMAZING!!! it has rhythm to it. its easy to relate to. good job on this one
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wow this is awesome metallica is a great band too
Thank you for entering Good luck
-♥Amy♥
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pleashure lol
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cool
this was very cool! i loved it! i listen to music like metalica and slipknot when i write, it is very weird how somethings turn out when you are listening to strange music!
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yup stranger things haf come out lol, fanks for the comment
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wow for a first song, this is awesome!
i like it a lot!, yeah metallica always give me inspiration to write music aswell, they're lyrics are awesome!
so yah awesome job dude! luv it! xx
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fanks dude!
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