Romance of Sacred Light ignites my soul!
Thy Passion, most Divine, in Sacrifice.
The mysteries of Grace--that Grace consoles
the deep afflictions-- bought at such a price.
Beloved, 'tis in Thee that I may live
and see, anew, the dawning of the day.
Eternal peace, eternal love Thou gives
and all that is not Thee must fall away.
O Holy, Holy, Holy is the Lamb.
M.A.King 6-21-09
A contest entry
- Rhyme Only: The Sacred Heart of Jesus by Frodofan.
575 points, ended June 24, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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As the judge commented, the meter and rhyme is excellent. Great choice of words, and well deserving of the gold.
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Wonderful work. I love the meter and rhythm of this piece. I could hear it as a hymn, being sung at mass. Thanks for entering.
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nice
i like this poem the best so far. the way you write this is so intricate, the rhyme scheme is perfection. i also like the ending, holy holy holy.
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