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Cabin Fever!

I'm laughing uncontrollably
As I fall to insanity
My state of mind is very scary
Hopefully it's temporary

My fish is now my closest friend
Our telepathic love we send
I spray a bug I run around
I try to make a different sound

I speak to me sincerely
Of muddy tape and disco tree
I dance in just my underwear
I hide because I think you stare

Which then inspires hide and seek
I count to ten I do not peek
I bang my head against a wall
I hurt my brain I cry I fall

I make a cake of Shake n' Bake
In mirror I find dandruff flake
I scrub I clean I wash and then
I do it over once again...

I sit and wonder why I stay
Locked in my house day after day

Intelligence comes over me -
"If I go out then I'll be free!"

I run to door...

I turn the lever...

I am cured of Cabin Fever!

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  • misterfish
    July 5

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    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

    That is the best laugh I've had in ages! Thats hilarious! Awesome work. I love the way you use rhyme and rhythm. So so good!!!

    Thank you so so much for entering. Good luck!


  • happy kitty kat
    July 1

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    this is really really gooood!

    i loved the rhyme in this poem, the count is perfect. i dont really think you need to revise this but whatever your heart thinks is good roll with it.