Hello Lass,
"You wish to pass?"
"On such a dark night"
"Aren't you a bit afraid?"
"Of being a bit alone in spite."
"In spite of you might ,"
"Fall and end up in the dust."
"Or even be dumped"
"On the trail in the brush."
Hello Lass
"Do you wish to pass?"
"What offer can you make?"
"Silly Lhow can I ask?"
"Of course I have class."
"I came to this lane for fun."
"Your horse has pleanty of run."
"Put your cross away."
"I must be on my way."
A contest entry
- FANTASY PICTURE INSPIRED COMPETITION VIII: 20 ENTRIES by ShelleyA.
2000 points, ended July 21, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A nice write and take on the picture prompt. Eerie. Nice flow, tone and feeling. Thank you for your entry.
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Hmm... I love where you took the picture prompt. Your words sound sinister and frightening. I read this before I looked at the artwork and I'd say you depicted the picture well. I wish you the best in the contest.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Right on target. Your poem says it all. Good luck in the contest.
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