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Definitely in a higher tax bracket now.

 

 

I still remember the roaches crawling

across my face at night. I got used to them

but my younger siblings never did.

 

It seemed we matured quickly

as if to hurry past it all

 

mom buying our school clothes at Salvation Army,

never getting the chance to experience

latest fashions we couldn't afford

 

moving from house to house as my alcoholic father

moved from job to job. We were always

‘the poor kids' to other kids.

 

Poor mom, it broke her heart knowing

she was powerless to give us anything more than

what we needed, and sometimes

not even that.   

 

We're all adults now; healthy, well adjusted,

with our own families, doing just fine, rolling in clover

you might say, compared to then.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Andre ben-YEHU
    January 16

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    At least half of the population of New York born up to the Seventies will relate to this poem. (I could say the same about Chicago!) "Definitely in a higher tax bracket now" is live depicting of a reality that I hope no child will have to through.

    I have learned through the reading of "Definitely in a higher tax bracket now."

    In respect and admiration

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


  • kathrynguyrocks
    August 24, 2009

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    i thought this was... surprisingly beautiful and moving. the poem flowed well i especially liked the "we were always 'the poor kids' to other kids.
    Poor mom"

    and the imagery was fantastic with the roaches. but i think my favorite line was
    "it seemed we matured quickly
    as if to hurry past it all"

    fantastic.
    personally, i love the salvation army.
    i loved winter cause then i coudl buy the big bill cosby men's sweaters that went to my knees that i'd wear with leggings and boots.
    they have everything there these days! its amazing.


  • Patpowers silver member
    August 9, 2009

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    Good work on this MJ. I was touched by what I read and how this mother knew the value of love.. THANKS!

  • Topnotchsy
    July 29, 2009

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    Sounds like Mom may have been poor when it came to money, but rich when it came to love. A heartfelt touching piece, and a reminder that love, not money, helps guide the younger generation toward a brighter future.


  • Harrisham Minhas
    July 12, 2009

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    Subtly and well-expressed.
    Congrats on the Bronze.




  • Ann45
    July 10, 2009
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    Yes we all have similar memories. One's better left just as that. Well penned


  • jinsays gold member
    July 10, 2009

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    shivers.
    yes, I know this kid. He lived it the house next to us. and his parents fought terrible.
    Excellent write.
    Love,
    jin


  • BearWoman gold member
    July 2, 2009
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    Nice title. I like where you took it.


  • Titus gold member
    July 1, 2009

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    the roaches, wow, reminds me of India back in 2002, but to follow a true account of this works, see this space,...... Titus

    as I said I'd be back, there is more to this piece than you'd let me reveal affects us personally, sadly, the clover is spiritual, and we'll miss her.


  • ajocean
    June 22, 2009
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    nice piece keep it up i like it.


  • Lilian of Tilburg
    June 21, 2009

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    It is always sorry when children suffer because somehow parents just can not manage. I know what this is like, only my dad was not a drunk.

    Like your style, intersting good freeverse with great meter

    Lilian


  • poetryality silver member
    June 21, 2009

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    Ugh! Your first line almost made me gag. I am so very fearful of "roaches", and for sure have had youthful encounters with them. I am most grateful that my adult life has afforded me NOT to have to live with the little pests. Whew! Ain't WE lucky. LOL

    My dad worked at Republic Steel, and as a youngster, I thought we were rich because all four of us smaller children had bikes. My two older brothers shared one. I think the opposite stands for me. I was much better off as a kid, where I did not have to scrounge for change in my couch cushions. LOL

    Times are hardest now. I am embarrassed to tell you what I earned last year as an independent artist but it is what I choose to do for a living and there are no regrets.

    I bet through it all, there were times that were wonderful that rich kids could never relate to. In all actuality, we were not rich, simply blessed to have two parents that worked like beavers building a damn to see that we had everything they could afford to give.

    Sorry for the rambling but your words made me reminisce in the best way. I wish you well in the challenge. It is good to roll in the "clover" for sure!


    Much Love Always ♥

    Renee


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    June 21, 2009

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    Michael,

    this is simply "Beautiful" you have captured a lot of hard times for people, i think parents wanting to give more then what they hand, because children
    were so grateful for the little things, i know about this, and i was so grateful, thank you so much for writing another beautiful peice of your heart

    Blessings

    Rend


  • Emmyb gold member
    June 21, 2009

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    memories like this can be bittersweet i suppose. though you are enriched for it. your mother would certainly have been happy to see you all turned out alright.

     

    a lovely write. x 

    • MJ Donnelly gold member
      June 21, 2009
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      Yes, and I'm sure that somewhere beyond, she is smiling.

      Thanks Emma.


  • Anguas-Confusion gold member
    June 21, 2009

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    this is amazing daddy.... happy fathers day... i hope you have a good day... i've missed talking to you... muchos love xxxxxxxxxx

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