Placed in the room with a gun in your hand.
lock the door and the key turns to sand
no way out
of that i have no doubt
reasons to live all seem to die
burried in the storm of this one lie
the lights start to dim
while all i do is think about her and him
"What do i do"?
the question that no one seems to get the answer to
"what do i feel"?
the only answer to somthing that shouldnt be real
gentle streams of water seem to flow
in through the cracks they seem to go
saoking my knees
like an ill faded disease
chills rise up my already straighten spine
while images of me and her are entwined
swimming to the top
hoping that this would stop
problems sease
my berath is at ease
the water soaked room is dry
leaving me wanting to cry.....
Placed in the room with a gun in your hand.
lock the door and the key turns to sand
no way out
of that i have no doubt
what do you think..and be honest.
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"What do i do"?
the question that no one seems to get the answer to
"what do i feel"?
the only answer to somthing that shouldnt be real
i love that line. it is so deep and has soo much meaning
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good one
great teddy.i like it. -
It took me forever to find your poems.. i couldn't read against yur bakground on the mainpage lol. This is a great poem and the picture is just wonderful.
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wow i love it
this is a fantaic poem i love it
the image is awsome
my fave part of the poem is
problems sease
my berath is at ease
the water soaked room is dry
leaving me wanting to cry
this part has so much to say
i love it
keep it up
you are talented nice write
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its written very well,and has nice flow... The feelings of sadness and despair are so well expressed and portrayed here. It makes me sad,the emotion is so vivid to me. Good write,hope the writer is well though.
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it's really good if u needa talk (YA me of all people)im all ears well eyes
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hey teddy. if u ever need to talk u no im here for u
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i honestly loved this poem squishy. please dont hurt yourself or do anything stupid. i loved the whole poem I'm here if you ever wanna talk to someone.
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... this is ver deep and very sad.... i really hope your ok... i'm here if you need to talk to me
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wow Jordan wow. I don't really know what to say. I hope everything is okay.
Please don't be sad. I hate it when you're sad.
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omg Jordan this was so good! please don't hurt yourself though! you know I'm here for you no matter what! keep up the good work! ily el jordano!
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aww bro god wow and no doing anything bad
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