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Let Me Go

Fading away,
Lost in despair.
Cannot get out,
Aching to break free.

No more,
Take this dagger.
Slowly pull away,
Freedom take hold of me.

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Freedom is something that is relative to all but may not be there. You may be free but within your mind, you can still be locked up with no way of getting out.

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  • KyleBerg gold member
    June 26
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    Such a beautifully sad write.
    Loved the last line especially.
    Thank you for your entry