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Untamed

When I howled
He fell in the vat
Of pure white lust;
I was solidified.

There is a disease
Not quite cancerous
I wish for the phallic
Repercussions of you

To enter involuntarily.
He says you are beautiful;
I the snout master;
I the call of duty; manically

Turning shadows into fear.
He says you are bewilderment;
I the wild;
I the spinster's fiend; soldierly

Transmuting lost hope into
Solitary isolation.
When I howled
He continued his march.

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  • "There is a disease
    Not quite cancerous
    I wish for the phallic
    Repercussions of you

    To enter involuntarily.
    He says you are beautiful;
    I the snout master;
    I the call of duty; manically"

    Wow!!!!!!!

    If this is what I think it's about -- it's one of the best poems of it's kind.
    Love it.