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The Never Ending Night Mare

I'm trapped in this never ending nightmare,
saying it was all because of you,
your false love haunting my despair,
along with this perfect illusion too,
this eternal dream i will always compare,
my entire life will always be right there,
this frightening lifeless dream i tare,( I tare)

I'm stuck on this feeling for you,
how do i stop this love for you,
what can i do to drown all of it,
who do you think made me this way,
where did i turn the wrong way,
when was it the day you loved me,
why did you give up on that feeling,
who took that love away from me,
was it really only taken from you,

my feet are glued to the ground,
it stops me from running away,
my heart hasn't really found,
the real reason of what you say,
i can't hear the right sound,
here on this lonely long forever day,
i wish i could of just turned around,
and walked out the other way,

i wouldn't be stuck in this rejection,
feeling this negative thought in my head,
while looking at your stupid reflection,
saying you love me not meaning what you said,
you weren't even much of a selection,
yet i ended up picking you instead,
i was a stupid fool to give you my affection,
all my wrong i never made it unsaid,
i shouldn't have walked in your direction,
but i gave you the love i had dread
to prove myself i was not dead
still stuck in this never ending nightmare.






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  • Great

    Ugh, this happens to me so many times! They say they love you but in the end, it makes it seem as they were only along for the ride and not meaning barely anything they said. (if that makes sense?)
    Anyways, You're VERY good at writing poems, I'll be sure to read more!


    • Ceroxity
      August 1
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      thanks

      thank you very much for the compliment i just put all my heart in to what i write it all just comes out. and yes it makes sence thats exactly how i felt you got the right message.