naked and waiting
I beseech you
paint love on my empty canvas
paint me under you
with savage kisses
stubble against smooth skin to brand me,
the heat of your
naked body against mine
wanting
wanting
to melt with me
taking my sunflower
and planting it on desire-soaked sheets
as night begins to fall with
the sunset of my innocence
Author notes
art credit: fabian perez
In a list
A contest entry
- Click 28. by perfectsunset.
625 points, ended July 3, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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What I really like about this is that there are no cliches or traditional erotic formulas present, nor is this pretentious in any way . . . which makes it very fresh. There is an "innocent" quality, if I can use that word, that makes this all very genuine and honest.
Very well done.
Garrison
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OOH! Nice...
The picture you drew here is as lovely as the prompt.
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Wow; so gorgeously sensual!
I love the kind of "rough" edge you
portrayed in the first stanza,
and preceding it with soft
visuals & emotion, as well
as before.
I loved this piece.
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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