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Lies...

Hug Me Hold Me Fuck I Feel So Alone I Miss Talking To You On The Phone
I Gave You My All Only To Fall I Tried So Hard To Hold On
Im So Heart Broken These Words Are Spoken In Dispair And You Dont Even Care
Your Lies Ensnared Me Compelled Me To Believe You Would Never Leave
Turns Out All You Did Was Mislead Me How Can This Be That This Hurt Me So Much?
I Guess I Have A Hunch For A One-Sided Love For Some Its Forever But Me Its Never
Im Always Hurt So Please Convert This Pain And Shame Into Something That Makes Me Sane
Lets Play The Blame Game Who Who Did Wrong And Who Did Right?
Who Fought With All Their Might? And Who Sat In The Side Lines?
We Will Find That In Your Mind What I Did Didnt Even Move You
And What You Did Was Use Me Abuse Me Left Me Alone For Dead...
In The End Im The One Hurt And Your Over There All Over Another...

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  • prankstar
    June 30

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    breath takiing..

    this is an increddible poem. It shows so much hurt and emotion. It's obvious you put alot of thought and effort into it. "Im Always Hurt So Please Convert This Pain And Shame Into Something That Makes Me Sane
    Lets Play The Blame Game Who Who Did Wrong And Who Did Right?
    Who Fought With All Their Might? And Who Sat In The Side Lines?" this part really got to me. your an absolutely amazing writter. I hope to read more from you soon. Keep writting. It would be a tragic loss to poetry readers if you didn't..


  • Kira65
    June 21
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    It love it! it is great!

  • Very Heartfelt

    i know how that feels, i think everyone does at some point in their life, that was a great piece of work and i can't wait to see more from you