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While Others Dream

While others dream of romance,
Soft footprints of symphony,
Tread under lazy shining stars.

Arms weave as grass waves,
Soul meets soulmate,
In the windswept fields,

Sun rises and parts the couple
Like clouds they depart from a dewy
Mattress and return tomorrow.

While others dream of romance.

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