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Shatter My Soul

Sticks and stones
May break my bones
But words can shatter my soul


The words goodbye
Are the hardest to say
In any situation
There's no easy way

Walking away
Each step I take
Walking on broken glass
Being strong is getting hard to fake

We've agreed
To think it through
No matter how long
I'll never get over you

Shattering my soul
Is every thought
Don't worry though
You'll never be forgot

I've never wanted anything
So bad
I've never found a situation
So sad

I'm three parts dead
Cause our love's died
So now I believe
That you never lied

All my faith
Comes back with fate
My heart's broken cause
It came back too late.

There's no going back
It's over now
I can't believe it
We said we'd never allow

I guess words mean nothing
It's never in our hands
I guess no matter what
We'll never understand.

So it's a lesson learnt
And a story's end
I'll let you believe I'm happy
Even if it's pretend

Anything to make you better
Make you move on
I guess things will get better
If we just be strong

I'll let you in on a secret
I can't be strong forever
Patience is wearing thin
I thought we'd be together...

I thought wrong
I'll remember you till I die
I'll always love you
Even if this is goodbye.

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  • The only thing I can find wrong with this is on line 40 it's not learnt its learned.
    Other than that this amazing i was already teary from your last one "We're Over Now" and now reading this just let my tears out great job you made me feel the emotion in this poem.