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Intoxicated

 

 

 

 

The scent of you

intoxicating me

I find myself falling deeper

 

into a world of sensuality

eroticism, and lust

your eyes turn

 

from to green to blue

hypnotizing me

as I lie here

 

handcuffed to the bed

while you continuously seduce

and make love to me

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt: Charmed

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Comments


  • Emmyb gold member
    June 21
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    WOW. now thats an early morning wake up call to go with my coffee. lovely. emmyb.


  • Angelflower
    June 20

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    This was really good! a wonderful take on the prompt! you really did a good job!

    Angel


  • lyricist
    June 20
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    this is good cant wait for you to put more to this


  • Dragonbabyx3
    June 20

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    Beautiful work on this one hun! It is sensually delish! Now, I have to run and change my normally hot shower....to a cold one... hrm, maybe I should put ice cubes at the bottom.... lol. You gonna catch me if I slip right?