When I look up high, at the stars above
I will always remember, your kind love
The journey we took, along life's route
Through times of laughter, and storms of doubt
Thanks for the kindness, you gave to me
And all of the truth, you've helped me see
A star from the heavens, your love was true
Helping me out, when I was blue
You brought me hope, the way that you should
Leading me to ways, that are so good
Your love was pure, and your love was strong
Even when you were right, and I was wrong
A wonderful person, you are to me
Helping the sick, and blind to see
Calming the crazy, and troubled in mind
Your soul is so beautiful, soft, and kind
A beautiful spirit, with beautiful feet
Next to you, in heaven we'll meet
With no more tears, and no more pain
Only new joy, and life to gain
Author notes
This poem is dedicated to a wonderful lady nicknamed Beautiful Feet
Beautiful Are The Feet That Bring Good News.
Romans 10:15
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wow! this a beautifully penned work of art. the rhymes are flawless and the meter never falters. the tone is soft for the message it conveys. so very well done. my best to you in the contest. you would make a lovely ap father for the host.
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this is a really good write. it took me by surprise because i thought it was gonna be all about feet and someone with a footaphobia thats not to good. but this poem was great. i loved every part of it. thankyou and good luck.
ps who would you like to be?
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A great poem it had a good rhyme and it was full of emotion
it is a very heartfelt poem
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Great poem
I likd it alot, you should check my out and tell me what you think, That was really deep, senstive, and on point. Great Job.
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This is sensitive and heartfelt. Nice expressions!! May God bless....take care
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This was so sweet
"Calming the crazy, and troubled in mind
Your soul is so beautiful, soft, and kind"
Perfect lines
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