Random acts of Kindness make the world go round
It shocks all who look because no reason is found
A helping hand, a donation, a door held open
All those lonely faces in the crowd just forever hoping
That someone will look at them, see all their pain
But the world is so perverse, others misery is their gain
A helping hand will show that you're a citizen of the earth
So help out each other, put others first
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie....8 poets....20 minutes... by islekine.
460 points, ended June 20, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Little Things That Made Your Day, PW Welcome by MomoniFeliyador.
800 points, ended July 5, 17 entries
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450 points, ended July 23, 38 entries
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800 points, ended July 10, 564 entries
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900 points, ended August 1, 7 entries
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Comments
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truly 'random acts of kindness' even small ones would make a big difference in our world...this is such a sincere piece...thank you for sharing it!
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This flows great and even though its short conveys a good message. Nice job.
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This is wonderful. If only people would be a little kinder to one another. The world would be a much better place. Nice job and keep on writing!
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I like this one. good point. people should learn to put others first, that way, we would all be first in line.
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very nice sweet poem, i love the flow and the message behind it, congratulations on winning silver for this, it was well deserved x
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Congratulations on your trophy! It's well earned!
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A lovely poem that speaks the truth!
Your poem is inspiring and as I go out my door today I will keep what you say in my mind. Thank you for saying hello to me today. -
I love the message within your poem. Congratulations on achieving the tool of internal expression from yourself to the poem. I feel very emotionally connected.
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thx for enetring
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Cute.
But the world is so perverse, others misery is their gain
A helping hand will show that you're a citizen of the earth
So help out each other, put others first
These line made me smile ahaha I like how you wrote this.
It's short but it gets the point across very well.
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To me, this read like a rap (this is a good thing). Very easy to read whilst conveying a tough messge. Bravo poet.
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Excellent and very true Jenny.. well written...mal
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Outstanding
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this is great , the message is conveyed very well
like it
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Well done Jenny this a very thought provoking poem and really deserved its award
Cherry
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Deep Thoughts
I am very impressed your effortless ability to write in rhyme, using sounds like" words. I once wrote a poem about people who ignore those who are different. "Who Are The Real Handicapped". One suggestion: when penning in sentences, be sure the line under, that is a continuation, is not in caps.
Always remember punctuation. It makes the reading easier. If not using punctuation, then try writing all in lower case. You really have talent! Best wishes for a long stay here.
Meleesa
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This is a lovely poem. Such a kind and gentle message. A message you'd think was obvious, but sadly isn't in our world. I hope more people read this and find inspiration to commit their own random acts of kindness. Congrats and the trophy. Thank you for your kind words on my poem by the by
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This is an awesome message you are putting out to people in this message. I wish more people were like this. I know I try to help when help is needed. I really enjoyed the read!!!
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This is what goes through my head all the time!!! There are really no words for this one. But those three little applaud guys will do all the talking for me.
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this was very beautiful, in dew words, it shows the beauty of kind acts, the little things that make a difference. I enjoyed this read. best of luck in the contest
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Nice job. I enjoyed this and I agree with your take on the prompt. I am sure you practise what you preach.
Mike
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Wonderful
What a great write for the theme. You expressed it so well. Best of luck in the contest.
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Awww for the first entry read...
It is super!! I love your emotion, ideas and feelings...
well penned! Thanks so much for your entry.
Best wishes in the contest and always!
Write on and on!
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