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In Silence (PhotoKu)

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In Silence

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A contemporary haiga actually...... enjoy
Written March 19th, 2004

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  • Sara Bellem
    March 25, 2004
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    Aw

    Aw, Great Ku Dad, your photokus are always my favorite. I apologize for taking so long to comment on your work, I admire with so. I enjoyed our chat last night & hope to have more of them in the very near future. Love the PhotoKu Dad, Its so refreshing to go & read your work again, seems liek forever & it probably has been. You mean the world to me ---Sara Dawn, Your Cyber Kid


  • CIndyReed
    March 22, 2004
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    so wonderful the lovers sharing a beutiful silence in a shawoded spot, great poem , take care

  • -o- AyeWright
    March 21, 2004
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    Like the ambiguity of the words, in the way this can be read two ways, depending upon how you split the syntax - thus, if you take it as 'in silence, and a shadow lovers share' the meaning of shadow intensifies - could this be mourning, or hiding a secret? The colours then heighten this meaning. Well done.

  • KritterKat
    March 20, 2004
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    PhotoKu,
    Powerful. How beautifully and succinctly you've captured this feeling.
    Meows,


  • Madison Attitude
    March 20, 2004
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    Beautiful! Aimee xo


  • poetryality silver member
    March 20, 2004
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    Exquisite! The sentiment and the photo compliment one another very well.

    Renee


  • Cemetery Rose
    March 19, 2004
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    Lovely job. The pic is only the icing of the ku


  • My Seven Miseries
    March 19, 2004
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    Wow. the poem says more than the picture... it might be worth a thousand words, but your words are worth 10,000


  • Clyde1023
    March 19, 2004
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    wow...again beautiful!
    (sorry i just reread it..)


  • Clyde1023
    March 19, 2004
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    wow this is so beautiful!


  • FlawedDestiny
    March 19, 2004
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    This is very calming and beautiful. Did you take the photo too..I love this. You write these so wonderfully. Great job on this.
    -MISTY-


  • Captainxc
    March 19, 2004
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    this is pretty cool. Unique b/c its different!


  • angelofcleansheets
    March 19, 2004
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    That's so incredibly beautiful... wow.

  • bombay
    March 19, 2004
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    yay! good job!


  • Divine
    March 19, 2004
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    I really like this. I could never get the whole adding words to a picture thing. But you make it look really beautiful. I hope to do poetry as good as this some day, I will stop by and read more of your stuff. Keep dreaming in ink.

    ~*~Divine~*~

  • Billbard silver member
    March 19, 2004
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    Don.Another beautiful photoku.Always enjoyable.Bill


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    March 19, 2004
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    Very beautiful, cemetary rose has made me appreciate the beauty in haikus, and this picture and poem is truly beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing this.
    take care

  • yoursbyperil
    March 19, 2004
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    Wow this is so beautiful... who would've known you could've said so much in so few words... I loved the idea you expressed in this...

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