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Depth Inspired

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Our worlds tipped, ‘til the whispers were real.
adding extra swing to my grace ~ deepening the feel.
Gently watering my flower, accents speak in our champagne flavored breeze,
shivers cascade through each bend and curve, pleading ardently.

take me now…

Down these long luscious lines ~ from mind to thigh, than hip to toe.
Center your attentions… the rhythm in this moment, slow.
Blissfully blooming heaven bound under your mouths desire.
Valleys traveled through twilight, silky depths inspired.

 

 

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Author notes

Cricketjeff

He always says he loves those long lines oh and rhyme too of course.

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  • JinSays gold member
    July 7

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    ohmy.
    this is yummy too.
    did you give poor Jeff a heart attack? haven't been seeing him around lately.
    Beautyful. I thought at first, that he'd collaborated with you. Really good impersonation.
    Love,
    jin

  • I'm sure CricketJeff must be very touched lol! Very sensuous. Might put him off his bowling Well done, best of luck for the contest.


  • Cannonsfire
    June 24

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    I am sure Jeff will enjoy this and its internal rhyme and rhythm, he appreciates free verse even if he does say he does it badly (lol he doesn't ) Well done here hun C


  • thepoetssoul
    June 24

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    Hey you did an exellent job with this piece of poetry.Love the rhythm and rhyme, and it's very sensual.Thanks for sharing your talent.

    Tony

  • Ha ha
    I can't wait to see who you get.

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