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I Dream You


I dream you in the morning
naked in my bed,
hair tossed like a salad,
explicitly lying beneath 300 count bedsheets;
and I'm wondering if you're wide open.

I dream you in the afternoon
looking exquisite in a black and blue dress...
moist lips longing for my kiss,
but they won't come close because they know
there will not be enough time
to finish what our passion will start.

I dream you in the evening
after your nice, warm bubble bath...
after a splash of your favorite perfume,
and you are sitting in my lap...
before the kiss that was put on hold
earlier in the afternoon.
I remember the black and blue dress you wore,
and the mystery lying beneath
300 count bedsheets
as our lips meet for the first time tonight.
I dream...
you were the woman in my life.


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  • DinkyDiver gold member
    August 4
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    I loved that line too - hair tossed like a salad awesome imagery hehe

    Let's hope one day these dreams come true sweetheart xx


  • Mari Goes gold member
    June 22

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    Dreams as this one can come any time of the day
    Hair tossed like a salad, that line made me smile
    Hope she gets out of your dreams and be part of your reality


    • forty-one
      June 25
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      MariGoes

      ... and smile you should because beauty such as yours should not be hidden by a frown. I'm glad you enjoyed this... especially that line!

      Troy

  • beautiful dream,
    i hope it all comes true for you.

    love ya,
    olivia rose

    • forty-one
      June 25
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      justgot2loveme

      Well, whether it does or doesn't... I will still be me. Glad you liked it(as usual).

      Your friend from PA.
      Troy

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