Smiles,
Laughs.
You are all I can think of
Perfect in your own way.
Loving you with all my heart.
To separate us,
Would destroy my heart.
Being together
Brings a smile to my face.
No crying
Will come with this.
Only happy
Gleeful bliss.
Happiness filled me up
When I first met you.
Would never regret it.
If I were to lose you
Depression would set in.
Now we know
We're a perfect match.
I love you with all my heart,
Pray that we never part ways,
Because that would crush both of our hearts.
Just perfect.
Author notes
This was for an ex.
Is it good or what?
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good
its really good! i like it!
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Ex's blow like the wind... Let them go.
Amazingly written.
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It is still very good. Whether or not the situation is dated, and the set of circumstances became unfortunate, these words and thoughts meant so much to you. That is what is most importantly great about this poem.
Loss and departure from a loved one is always unfortunate, but eventually you will look back on these writings one day and not only remember the good times and shamelessly remember the feelings that went along with everything, but you will remember why this was a stepping stone in gaining new life experiences. Even if they are painful and harsh ones. a quote that comes to mind is that of Three Days Grace's Pain, "I'd rather feel pain than nothing at all."
Stylistically, I liked the word choice and flow of this piece. Good work,. True poetry, whether past or present comes from the heart and this one does. -
and its lovely :)
just perfect
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Wonderful setiments...
splendid piece...
Kisses all over, my dear!
Galaxy2
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I know exactly how this feels. I love the emotion in this piece.
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This made me smile, a good write
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Now if I wasn't so parania, I;d say this was for me.
but nope, it wasn't but, I will. Lovely feelings of how lovely you two are still close. Nice one
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I agree with ButILoveHer, this was an awesome poem you have put together here and I look forward to reading more from you as soon as I get more time. For the fact this was for an ex. I'm sorry things didn't work out for the two of you. Everything in life I've learned happens for a reason and that reason is to make us stronger. I've also concluded that the reason why bad things happen to good people is to open them up to the possibilities that in life absolutely anything is possible and can happen with a drop of a hat. The emotion in this poem was very deep and again I'm sorry that things didn't work out for the two of you.
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Just perfect is right hun..
This was pure joy to read
Made me smile
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well penned. i like how it flows from line to line. i like how emotion is evident, like embroidery or weaving into this piece. well done
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this was really well written qand says alot....i know how you could feel, i really liked this. really great write
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This was perfectly written and perfectly made.
Good Job Bella
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