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The Road

Sitting at the door
Excited to go
TO open the door is all she wanted,
She ran down our steps
Eager to play.
A car pulled into our driveway
To deliver our mail.
We should've paid attention
To our little dog.
The driver didn't either
And drove right over her.
We came running
And lifeted her up.
All that happened after that,
Was she took her last breath.


Dedicated to a great little dog, Ginger.

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This was about my dog Ginger, who was a dachsund chihuahua, who was ran over in our driveway, and she was 17 years old. She took her last breath in my mother's arms. It's very sad.

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  • Sharon Marie gold member
    October 21

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    Awe Sad!

    So sorry about your dog Ginger I've got a dog who runs out the door everytime someone forgets to use the back door she runs for the road we never when it's there time to go we love to they a part of the family. I'm glad that someone was there to hold ginger in those final moments . God has a place for His little creatures to may she rest in peace.Very deeply moved by your poem.

     

    God Bless!

    Sharon


  • Goddess of illusion
    September 1

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    Very sad write indeed, also have a doggy, a yorkshire crossed with something else, lol, also 17 years old this year...

    I'm sorry you lost her...

    Keep your magical pen flowing

    Elmarie


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    August 5

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    Superb

    A fine write, and tribute, as well. I love animals, so you have my empathy. You expressed your thoughts quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us.