We were together
Only for a while,
Thought everything
Would turn out perfect.
But that all changed
When she came into the picture.
Anger constantly
Flowed throughout my body.
Then she came up to me,
Two notes in her hand.
"The bottom note will explain everything."
Running off
To Hide all the pain and tears.
Now my heart is
Crumbling to Pieces.
Is it good or what?
Comments
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very good
I like this it kinda reminds me of something that happened to me over this past summer

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Pretty.
This is a common pretty in your pain, but it's elegant almost. Great write.


