Burning tonight,
Forever in flame,
Look back on your deeds with shame,
Think that of all the horrible things,
That was the one you’d change,
And as we burn together for eternity
May you forever feel the guilt of hurting me.
Author notes
lalala. well I like it.
A contest entry
- & tonight, we burn. ♥ by Immortal Obscurity.
1000 points, ended July 4, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hmmm... I like your use of the title as a prompt. Unfortunately, I specifically asked for no rhyme, so I will be removing it. But since you didn't suck, here's a clappy anyhow.
Better luck next time
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I love the title, is it an original?
And the poem...well I have to say that this works incredibly well and I really enjoyed it.
Keep it up!!
--Katie.
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thx yu
glad yu liked it.
yes the title is original, i made it myself.
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