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I Like Spiders

I like spiders!
They live by eating flies,
And other buzzing critters
With giant, compound eyes.

I like observant spiders
With fuzzy, curious faces,
Their many eyes a-glitter,
Placed in the strangest places.

I like the kind of spiders,
Who build webbed and wondrous traps;
Their silk with dew drops shimmers,
But will snare unwary chaps.

I like ferocious spiders,
Whose hollow, pointed fangs,
Holds juice that kills their dinners,
Then digests it while it hangs.

I like hungry spiders,
With their very special jaws,
Which suck their tasty suppers,
Like milk shakes slurped through straws

I like spiders,
But not hiding in my bed,
Or sleeping in my slippers,
Or climbing on my head.

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    June 21
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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    I really love this poem it is so well written and it is a delight to read I like spiders too - just not when they appear on my bedroom walls on the middle of the night!

    Welcome to the site, I hope that you enjoy your time here at AllPoetry!


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  • BlindingLove
    June 20
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    that was funnaful!!!