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Perpetual Night

I can see you
I know who you are
but you know not me

Nightmares grew
dreams drifted far
beyond being free

I paid the price
captured the tears
created my hell

Millions of lice
feeding on fears
none will tell

I savor the taste
of multitudes quaking
confounded by reason

Love laid waste
melted... baking
winters season

I haunted history
the days of old
in hungry flight

Truths mystery
slowly unfold
perpetual night.

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  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    July 2

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    Outstanding...

    Love the triple line rhyme scheme here...
    Impressive work as always...
    Keep it up...
    Well penned, well versed, well done!!!


  • teddybare gold member
    June 20
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    yes!

    i want to see this ... would those faces be priceless? great stuff you awesome poet