Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Abusin'

Breaking down,
Drinkin' beer,
All's unclear;

Fuck you 'coz now I can see.

Smokin' weed,
Poppin' pills,
Tripping balls;

A crazy one-way ride to Hell;

I see the answer,
But no one catches on;
Rip just one more bong...

My two-faced abusin',
Stoner confusion,
Paranoid delusion;

My brains fried but who the hell cares?
I'm stronger than death.

Author notes

Pretty much 'self drug-indulged' inspiration. The song "Stronger Than Death" by Black Label Society, is a song that got me singing some of these alternative lyrics. I've since added on my own thoughts. Sometimes I like listening to songs and singing something else that I feel fits, this one was so good I had to write it down. It goes well with the tune; but is a song I'd like to write into my own tune and context. A song of my own thoughts and inspiration in words.

My words, against a different song.

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • Love it!

    its like a weed poem and dark all at the same time!! This is the best weed poem i've read bay far!! Keep it up!!
    XoXo