her soul is hiding in the DARK.
her heart beats for love.
her body tortured through emotion.
neglected happiness substituted by empty promises.
she still breathes not knowing why!
possibly the DARKside of the moon will shine.
reasons of insanity traded from true reality.
Author notes
you could say this is like a wierd dedication to this author for her poem at the given link inspired my poem which was my comment, DARK
http://allpoetry.com/Pixielated
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5440841
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you
Thank you DARK. That's the sweetest thing anyone's done for me in a long time. *hugs* I don't really know how else to show my appreciation than to just keep saying thank you for being there and for reading me. I am very flattered that my poem inspired you. thank you,
Pixie
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you said plenty with those two words from the start. i can tell that you enjoyed it which is naturally just an extension of you since i understood exactly what was happening with you. thank you for the inspiration, DARK.
ps: i stencilled your name on one of the empty seats up here on the DARKside where we can watch the sun's glow.
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Wow~
Oh My this is intense~ especially with the line:
her body tortured through emotion
Miss Your Presence here my Friend~
Powerful piece Sweet One~
Keep that quill dancing~
Thank You for sharing Your Talent
Best wishes in all You do
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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thankz, maybe i can come down from the DARKside of the moon more often and post something, luvya, DARK.
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