The world that teaches us what we are not,
the predators or savagery, or prey
A cold, indifferent universe has wrought
us living souls with sacred things to say.
Like this: We are not savages that feed
upon the carcass of a slaughtered foe,
nor need to fear of wretchedness and need
giving in to the winds of fear that blow.
But though the choices some are wont to make
will imitate the jungle's savagery,
redemption's found when we will not forsake
a sacred love that urges us to BE.
For joy, we've always had what we would need...
a love transcending wretched lust or greed.
Please tell me what you think
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This poem is designed to make one really think.
'The world that teaches us what we are not' - lot's of truth in this.
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Nicely Done
Quite a thought provoking write sadly there's a strong element of truth within it
along with some nicely chosen imagery to express it so nicely. I like the last stanza
best of all.Yes unconditional LOVE is ALL we need.not a predator run capitalist
dog eat dog poverty amidst plenty society (wasn't that nice imagery Pam ?)
Best Wishes .....George...
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a good piece of poetry penned, ah the slaughtered foe, well perhaps we do not go out and actually kill to eat, but all those wrapped up produts in the supermarkets and such, they are the remnants of life, meaty joints, sausagaes all neatly packed etc
ah love, for the light on high, all smiles. 
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good poem
I have just one major observation...the link of your dhampada lines with the love u describe here:
For joy, we've always had what we would need...
a love transcending wretched lust or greed.
this makes the poem a deep meaningful piece -
you are growing as a woman of inspiration pam..perhaps a major life change has caused this,,,pete
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Nice job here Pam...very inspirational work again. I like what you wrote down. THANKS AGAIN!
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Human nature,
we tend to be governed by our emotions, perception brings out these emotions, they are not who we are but we cling to them.
Just simply be
accept and embrace,
this is who we are beneath the superficial
I was
as I read, you have hit the mark
beautifully
God bless you my friend...
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Hear, hear!!
The Poet Sage Has Spoken!! I'm so glad I clicked on this poem today, your meaningful words have really helped me with my own internal struggles this morning. Thank you, you've made my day complete... I'm wishing you all the very best!!
Peace, love & hugs, xx Cyn 
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If my words helped you this day then I am truly blessed indeed!
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Outstanding
This speaks to me.
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I love your sonnets! That closing couplet is key- a strong message. I enjoyed this, your very talented.
K
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This is captivating! The sonnet is my favorite form and you have used it as if you own it with this poem. Wonderful!
Love,
Amera♥
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Trailblazing...!
I think this is excellent, you have cut through the jungles that live in the mind, self imposed/inherited by whatever means; nourished continuousely by sheer ignorance; we blind ourselves to the truth all the time, alas the animal lives on inside...as long as we keep it caged it will control us...let it go, it cannot harm us if we neither fear nor acknowledge it, there is no other way; the road to freedom is long and hard but it is there patiently awaiting our silent footsteps the choice is ours alone...
it's so nice to see your poetry evolving along this path my dear friend! I watch you with increasing interest and enthusiasm you have taught me many things in your quiet way...
here's a little quotation for you;
'do not go where the path may lead, go instead where there is no path and leave a trail'
Ralph Waldo Emerson
have a blessed day!
J-J
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