You were midnight's folly
breathing butterflies
on the arch of spine,
consuming each hurt
you then consigned them
to yesterday's catacomb.
A contest entry
- Quickie Now #41 by amaranthine lover.
515 points, ended June 23, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is gorgeously done! Thanks for taking the time to pen for my itty bitty contest!
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you create such unique thoughts with this piece...the idea of midnight and leaving behind past hurts to yesterday's catacomb is very intriguing. Well done.
Rory
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dark and sublime
midnight butterflies,,original beauty ..love estranged
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What a lovely, sensual, delicate loving little poem! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
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Hi pretty one!! I like this one.....
Good to see you posting again...
Lady D
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What a wonderful piece, Di! I love the two lines "breathing butterflies/ on the arch of spine"! Actually, I love the entire thing but can't quote it here lol. You've done a fine job of posting it up there ^^^.
The idea of someone consuming your hurts and placing them in yesterdays catacomb's is such a unique idea that it truly caught me by surprise and made me read it again. You've done a masterful job with this piece and I've enjoyed it tremendously. Well done, Di!! 
Lily ♥
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excellent
Hey long time no see
I enjoyed the read
Excellent for the prompt
Best of luck in the contest
I just posted a new one hope you come visit me
Hugs
Susan~~~
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